October 16, 2009
“The artist’s life is frustrating not because the passage is slow, but because he imagines it to be fast.”
– David Bayles & Ted Orland, “Art & Fear,” 1993
“The first draft of Psycho Ex is killing me not because it is a bad first draft, but because I was hoping it was the final draft.”
– Robb, 2009
Based upon the macro feedback from a few rounds of readers, Psycho Ex has some problems. Specifically:
- The first act/half is WAY too slow
- The middle is confusing
- The third act is somewhat clunky
- Nobody “gets” the ending
So it’s merely the beginning, the middle, and the end that need work. I guess that’s why they call it the “first” draft.
October 4, 2009
After days of agonizing I finally uploaded Psycho Ex (it has a new title) to zoetrope.com for peer review.
I don’t know why I still feel like the thing isn’t done – it’s currently on its third round of readers and responses have been positive. It’s as if there’s some threshold I still haven’t crossed, but I don’t know what it is.
The script will be up for 30 days and due to the way the site/community is designed it should get 4 or 5 reviews. We’ll see how it goes.
Next stop after that: agent queries, contests, and inktip.
October 2, 2009
I’m at home with a sick Parker (age 4). We’re watching videos about flights to the moon.
I asked Parker if he is going to be an astronaut when he grows up and go to the moon. He said no. I asked him what he is going to be. He said a teacher.
Then he asked me what I’m going to be when I grow up. I said I don’t know.